Jojiro's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Meet]

Good piece, strong sense of the ominous and the unknown. After the detailing of the grass and the beautiful semi-parchment sky, I do wish that there were a little more to the amorphous blobs that indicated effort or polish, though I appreciate that having them be shapeless masses with no detailing except for two points for eyes may have been a stylistic choice.

I really do appreciate the color palette, as limited as it is, because it fits the picture nicely. I think in the future just make sure that different parts of the piece match; the more I look at it, the more I feel as if the grass and the sky go together, but there is so little done with the blobs that they seem almost cartoony in comparison.

ArcadeHero responds:

Thank you for review!

[Kim Pine]

Right arm looks bizarre, even given your odd choice of stretched perspective. It capture's Kim's tomboyish flair well, though I wish that it also caught the fact that she is in fact female (a fact I can't tell from this at all).

TaraGraphika responds:

Have you seen Family Guy? There's one flashback when Peter was playing with his toy car or something, when his sibling came to talk to him?

Yeah, pretty much sums it up.